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Sky to Freedom

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Is it possible to keep to the sky?
You know, there is little to gain
In those dreams that make you fly.
So what's the point in your refrain
From simply watching the ways
Of the emerald, swaying trees
Or the rivers that flow for days?
Ah, you want to be free
Even though it comes with a price.
You want to spread black feathers
Only to let the white ones entice
Your chained soul altogether.
You're sure this is your choice?
I mean, we've been forever
Controlled by that voice!
Though our only endeavor
Was to be out of that cave.
With a single wish for freedom,
And yet, we are no longer slaves
To the place we came from.
Even though you are no longer caged
The call of the growing sky
Keeps us forever engaged
Though we may try to rise and fly.
I've been working very hard on this poem. The idea struck me one night as I was about to fall asleep, and I couldn't put it down! I really like this one, and decided to share it with you all. This poem is meant to be spoken, actually, with lots of planned pauses and dynamics... I think I might make it into a song! ;)
Anyway, thank you so much for reading! I hope you liked it!
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CarmineDevian's avatar
I guess it would me possible to write a very good song out of this, very good anyways