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There was a girl
That painted the earth.
She tried to capture
Its vast beauty
With greens
And browns.

With a mere thought
The girl drew rolling hills
To be colored with
Her brilliant paints.

A stroke could call
Forests to her canvas
With leaves and footprints
Filled with life
Waiting to be created.

She would paint the greens
Of a forgotten meadow.
She thought of blossoms
Brought back with
Vivid pinks
And royal purples.

She painted snowy mountains
And deep plateaus.
Her sketches showed
Empty burrows
And closed caverns.

But sitting back to watch
Her paintings come to life
She realized something
Now obviously clear.

The girl was lonely.

So she began to draw beings
Living and breathing things
To fill the empty gaps
Of her paintings.
Here's a poem inspired by another poem by the lovely :iconbe-back-soon: I really love their poem, and I hope mine does it justice as a response! You can read the poem here: [link]
Thank you for reading, and I hope you enjoyed it! :)
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:iconthewitchofgrich:
theWitchofGrich Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
beautiful :D
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BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Student Writer
:D Thank you so much!
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ThePoeticDragon Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am astounded by the strength of this collaboration between two different poets, I mean, it's seems as though there is only one poet, not two.
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:iconbelarosewolf:
BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student Writer
:D Thank you! I love making these responses!
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ThePoeticDragon Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no, thank you for being a poetic genius working with another poetic genius on what is already an astounding collab.
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:iconbelarosewolf:
BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student Writer
I-I... :blush: Thank you!
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:iconthepoeticdragon:
ThePoeticDragon Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*inserts classic Fluttershy shyness*
y-y... you're welcome
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:iconbelarosewolf:
BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student Writer
Haha~ :eager:
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:iconthepoeticdragon:
ThePoeticDragon Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU GOT THE REFERENCE!?!?(mlp by the way)

You. Are. Awesome.
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:iconbelarosewolf:
BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student Writer
Yep~ *bows* You're awesome too!
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ArthurCrow Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Professional Writer
Mmm adore the earthy feel of this, your lush descriptions came to life in your lines.
Beautifully scribed! :heart:
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:iconbelarosewolf:
BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :blush: I'm glad you like it!
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:iconarthurcrow:
ArthurCrow Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Professional Writer
Totally enjoyed :heart:
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:iconbelarosewolf:
BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student Writer
:D That honestly made my day!
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:iconarthurcrow:
ArthurCrow Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Professional Writer
Well I'm so glad I could do that :)
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:iconbelarosewolf:
BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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:iconthehiddenpath:
thehiddenpath Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. I absolutely love this! Great job!!!
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:iconbelarosewolf:
BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :D
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guitarbri Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012   General Artist
wonderful work as always
Bela :)
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:iconbelarosewolf:
BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much, and for the favorite as well~ :D
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:iconguitarbri:
guitarbri Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012   General Artist
you're welcome :D
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:iconbe-back-soon:
Be-Back-Soon Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful! And looks like it calls for another continuation! Hehe! :D
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:iconbelarosewolf:
BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :D And it's one I'll be awaiting patiently~
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Be-Back-Soon Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem!
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